Research Guidelines

Manuscript Evaluation

Reviewer’s Information
E-Mail:
drkimberlyzhu@wzu.edu.cn
Title:
Language Editor
First Name:
Kimberly
Last Name:
Kolletar-Zhu
Affiliation:
Wenzhou University
Country:
China
Specialization:
Education
Google Scholar Profile:
 
ResearchGate Profile:
 
ORCID ID:
0000-0002-5347-9575
Evaluation Report
Kindly enter comments per section of the manuscript (All comments should be detailed to provide adequate information for authors)
General comment
There are several unclear sentences, word choices, and several punctuation issues
throughout the paper.
Introduction
Needs more information regarding your research and what you set out to find. Too
many references and outdated references were used within the introduction.
Literature review
Too many references and outdated references were used. More updated literature
should be reviewed and possibly more current information included.
Methodology
The methodology has a good design and used previously proven research methods 
Results
Data was able to find many constraints  and have proven alternative methods of
research should be held in the future.
Discussion
Thorough discussion regarding this and future research needs.
Bibliography/References
Too many references and outdated references.  
Others
No keywords are listed. Various grammar mistakes. Too  many references and not
enough personal writing and/or actual research information.
Final Note
I think the research is meaningful and deserve more attention.  I think there should be
more recent literature cited as well as alternative and updated teaching methods.
Please rate the following: (1 = Excellent) (2 = Good) (3 = Fair) (4 = poor)
Originality
2
Contribution To The Field
2
Technical Quality
3
Clarity Of Presentation
3
Depth Of Research
3
Recommendations
Kindly mark with an X
Accept As Is
 
Requires Minor Corrections
 
Requires Moderate Revision
x
Requires Major Revision
 
Not Suitable for Further Processing
(Please be clear and specific)
 
Additional Comments
Please add any additional comments (Including comments/suggestions regarding online supplementary materials) if any:

Word Template for Journal of Educational Technology and Innovation

Author Namea* and A. N. Authorb

a)Department, University, City, Country; b)Department, University, City, Country

Provide full correspondence details here including e-mail for the *corresponding author

Provide short biographical notes on all contributors here if the journal requires them.

Repeat the title of your article here

Type or paste your abstract here as prescribed by the journal’s instructions for authors. Type or paste your abstract here as prescribed by the journal’s instructions for authors. Type or paste your abstract here as prescribed by the journal’s instructions for authors. Type or paste your abstract here.

Keywords: word; another word; lower case except names

Subject classification codes: include these here if the journal requires them

Heading 1: use this style for level one headings

Paragraph: use this for the first paragraph in a section, or to continue after an extract.

New paragraph: use this style when you need to begin a new paragraph.

Display quotations of over 40 words, or as needed.

  • For bulleted lists
  1. For numbered lists

Displayed equation ( )

Heading 2: use this style for level two headings

Heading 3: use this style for level three headings

Heading 4: create the heading in italics. Run the text on after a punctuation mark.

Acknowledgements, avoiding identifying any of the authors prior to peer review

  1. This is a note. The style name is Footnotes, but it can also be applied to endnotes.

References: see the journal’s instructions for authors for details